ScionoftheBlade wrote:

Entry: A poem I wrote. Its about Akui's mother before she told him how he was conceived. If it doesn't fill the requirements please tell me. If it does tell me how I may improve the poem to suit your preferences

How to explain
To the ears of a child
A night so painful
Yet, pasionate and wild

How could she explain
That she lived in fear
Of the painful knowledge
A son she would not rear

The pain of losing every litter
Save a one girl pup
To help against despair
Of nearly giving up

The pain of this secret
Held so very long
Now she must acnowledge
Keeping the secret is wrong.

-Zodiac
Gaia Name: Scionoftheblade